A Taste of Gold and Iron, Alexandra Rowland, 2022 novel. Fantasy m/m romance between a prince and his bodyguard. Sadly I think this book did not quite work. I wanted to like it - they've written some fanfic I loved (as well as a
novella unrelated to this book that was fun but not outstanding), and it was clearly written to be Very Tropey. A "why can't an original story be as full of the stuff we love as fic is" book. Which I support! And there are definitely a bunch of good elements bouncing around here! Unfortunately I didn't think it quite held together structurally. The first chapter was kind of a mess - too much information too fast, too much happening too fast, what are we supposed to think of any of these characters, what is this book even about. I got put off and read two other novels before the pressure of library due dates sent me back to this one. It got better but continued to have weird tonal shifts, like, wait, is this a dark and tense hour or is it time for banter and group teasing? And then I wasn't quite sure why it stopped exactly where it did; why was that scene, that set of scenes, the resolution. I mean, okay, one set of conflicts had been resolved, but it didn't quite land for me as a romance-ending HEA, or the end didn't quite feel like it answered the start, or something. (I think in something marketed as straight-up romance we would have gotten an epilogue to do some of that work. Interestingly, the author has written an optional post-canon non-canonical epilogue on AO3, which I haven't read yet, as I wanted to write up this review based only on the published canon.)
I'm inclined to blame all of these problems on a rather fanfictional sort of problem, namely that the author has spent a *lot* more time with the characters than the reader has, and thus in any given scene always has this whole weight of preexisting love and understanding for them, they're always part of a greater context. I mean, in fanfic that isn't a problem, because the reader has the same greater context (or at least a similar one, the same canon text if not the same fandom texts), but here, Rowland mentions that they've written it over from scratch six times, and almost everything has been replaced or otherwise massively overhauled, and, like, cool, but maybe Rowland now has six books of feelings about these characters and we only get to read one? I mean, I don't know if this is making sense, obviously authors are always already more invested in and familiar with their characters than a reader can be, but, I don't know. Maybe not quite all of the right bits of the iceberg are making it to the page, to mix a metaphor horribly. (ETA: like there's bits where the characters talk about how "nobody else would understand everything they've been through together", when I didn't feel like the text really supported it feeling like *that* much. But all six versions of it, that would add up.)
Anyways this is all very harsh, when in fact I did quite enjoy quite a lot of it. I would recommend it to people who like the Barrayar bits of Vorkosigans, or who ever shipped Gen/Costis or Maia/his nohecharei, or have read multiple things on AO3 tagged "king and lionheart", or have a fealty kink and know this about themselves and yet somehow none of the aforementioned applies. I will almost certainly read Rowland's *next* romance - it will be interesting to see what that is, whether it's a followup about these characters, like Foz Meadows is doing with the Strange and Stubborn Endurance sequel, or a standalone about different characters like Everina Maxwell is doing (those being the obvious comps; it's an exciting time for sff m/m romance). I just... I just want slightly different editing choices to have been made, here, and that's frustrating. :/