fic post: Thin Ice

[psocoptera]

Funny story: I write "The Things We Did And Didn't Do", think I've said everything I possibly have to say about Jack and Bitty, and now I can get back to actually working on one of my WIPs or an Agents of SHIELD bunny or... anything.

Hahahahaha.

This is the longest thing I've ever finished and posted (although not the longest thing I've ever written). Is it any good? I have no idea, but I've been pretty goddamn submerged in it for the last two weeks, so I hope it's at least interesting.

Thin Ice, 17000 words of Check Please alternate universe shenanigans. Completely, utterly unreadable if you don't follow Check Please.

I'm not usually one to beg for comments (except, uh, by posting my stories in the first place) but this is by far the longest thing I've ever not had betaed, so if anyone does read it and has feedback I'd love to hear what didn't work.

Comments

[une-jonquille.livejournal.com]

oooooooh

(AU in which this winter makes Bitty super homesick and sad, the group takes him to Boston for some fun event, shenanigans on stuck trains and Jack rescuing Bitty from snowdrifts ensue)

[psocoptera.livejournal.com]

ARE YOU WRITIN - excuse me. Are you writing this AU, she asked politely, and not shouting in your face while squealing? I would be dolphin-noises excited to be in a fandom with you, I tried to get on the kpop train but it just failed to stick somehow.

[une-jonquille.livejournal.com]

Um... I can try? I mean, it's been years since I've been to Boston, and I haven't been keeping up with the comic so I barely know the frogs, but I'll see what I can do.